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11/11/2005 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Well, I don't know what to think of that. It seems really random. I don't know if I like it that much. I'm sorry. I usually like your stuff a lot.
10/28/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
beautiful.. I love the first stanzas
10/27/2005 c1 6Gilee7
Once again, great rhythm. And good . . . imagery? I don't feel that "happy" emotion you talk about in the summary, though. I don't really feel any emotion in this piece.
10/25/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Simple and sweet. Brava!
10/24/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
wow, i like the imagry. the rhyme and flow was good too. i liked the last stanza "broken chains/of tensing string/real smiles/and fairy wings" thats really pretty. good job and KW and thanks for the review!

10/23/2005 c1 242LauraKM
This is one of the best rhyming poems i've ever read on this site. I love the imagery you've used here. Living proof, that not all good poetry is written when depressed. Going on my favs.
10/22/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
WOW.this rhyming is amazing-it flows so beautifully.Delicious.It'd be a crime if I didn't add it to my faves-honestly,this is just...wow...

10/20/2005 c1 182Jason Daniels
coolness. like the way the lines tie in together well done.

live on the edge..!@#$%

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