for costume11/11/2005 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
Well, I don't know what to think of that. It seems really random. I don't know if I like it that much. I'm sorry. I usually like your stuff a lot.
871no.peace.los.angelesWell, I don't know what to think of that. It seems really random. I don't know if I like it that much. I'm sorry. I usually like your stuff a lot.
10/27/2005 c1 6Gilee7
Once again, great rhythm. And good . . . imagery? I don't feel that "happy" emotion you talk about in the summary, though. I don't really feel any emotion in this piece.
6Gilee7Once again, great rhythm. And good . . . imagery? I don't feel that "happy" emotion you talk about in the summary, though. I don't really feel any emotion in this piece.
10/24/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
wow, i like the imagry. the rhyme and flow was good too. i liked the last stanza "broken chains/of tensing string/real smiles/and fairy wings" thats really pretty. good job and KW and thanks for the review!
~davida
wow, i like the imagry. the rhyme and flow was good too. i liked the last stanza "broken chains/of tensing string/real smiles/and fairy wings" thats really pretty. good job and KW and thanks for the review!
~davida
10/23/2005 c1 242LauraKM
This is one of the best rhyming poems i've ever read on this site. I love the imagery you've used here. Living proof, that not all good poetry is written when depressed. Going on my favs.
242LauraKMThis is one of the best rhyming poems i've ever read on this site. I love the imagery you've used here. Living proof, that not all good poetry is written when depressed. Going on my favs.
10/22/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
WOW.this rhyming is amazing-it flows so beautifully.Delicious.It'd be a crime if I didn't add it to my faves-honestly,this is just...wow...
E.Ebony
26Elizabeth EbonyWOW.this rhyming is amazing-it flows so beautifully.Delicious.It'd be a crime if I didn't add it to my faves-honestly,this is just...wow...
E.Ebony
10/20/2005 c1 182Jason Daniels
coolness. like the way the lines tie in together well done.
live on the edge..!@#$%
182Jason Danielscoolness. like the way the lines tie in together well done.
live on the edge..!@#$%