for Protect Me From What I Want3/26/2006 c8 other
argh! its so good! please update ASAP! i really wanna know who she chooses!
argh! its so good! please update ASAP! i really wanna know who she chooses!
3/11/2006 c7 
1Limegreenqueen
wat that teaser better not mean that silence and gabe are brother and sister. the name silence is wierd but i have tallked to caliing her Encie. i know wierd but you say the word silence so many times in the story i dont know what your talkin about her name or the word. to tell you some suggestions. no silence shouldn't get with dan cause he's an ass. and silence should tell Gabe what happened he would protect her from anything. about their parents you should show a little bit of thier love life but make sure there life doesnt become the story. lacey should be molested by that science teacher and dan should be arrested for being stupid. i knew something was wrong with him ppl that sexy are always evil. okay update as soon as you can cause everyone is waiting love karla
1Limegreenqueenwat that teaser better not mean that silence and gabe are brother and sister. the name silence is wierd but i have tallked to caliing her Encie. i know wierd but you say the word silence so many times in the story i dont know what your talkin about her name or the word. to tell you some suggestions. no silence shouldn't get with dan cause he's an ass. and silence should tell Gabe what happened he would protect her from anything. about their parents you should show a little bit of thier love life but make sure there life doesnt become the story. lacey should be molested by that science teacher and dan should be arrested for being stupid. i knew something was wrong with him ppl that sexy are always evil. okay update as soon as you can cause everyone is waiting love karla
3/10/2006 c7 crazybutt3rfly01
I really like your story... continue updating it and keep it up!
I really like your story... continue updating it and keep it up!
3/10/2006 c7 Kessie1315
Aw, this chapter was sad.
Dan is flipping Satan, and Gabriel is an angel.
Whoa, Gabriel is actually the NAME of an angel, you know? Is that why you named him Gabriel? Idk, its 12:00 at night and I'm high off of life right now. Tehe.
I don't wanna wait 2-3 weeks, but I suppose I have to :-(
I wish I get two weeks off, but right now it's spring break, so I only get one. Dang.
This is becoming a pointless review isn't it? I'm sorry.
I loved this chapter; Dan is evil. I think I said somethin like that already...haha..
Aw, this chapter was sad.
Dan is flipping Satan, and Gabriel is an angel.
Whoa, Gabriel is actually the NAME of an angel, you know? Is that why you named him Gabriel? Idk, its 12:00 at night and I'm high off of life right now. Tehe.
I don't wanna wait 2-3 weeks, but I suppose I have to :-(
I wish I get two weeks off, but right now it's spring break, so I only get one. Dang.
This is becoming a pointless review isn't it? I'm sorry.
I loved this chapter; Dan is evil. I think I said somethin like that already...haha..
3/10/2006 c1 1Limegreenqueen
hey i absolutely love ur ist chapter . i love your writing style and how you dont write with "like" as every other word. oh please update soon but in the meantime i am going to try not to skip all of my classes so that i can read this story and happy spring break where ever you are but i'm in houston, texas usalove karla
1Limegreenqueenhey i absolutely love ur ist chapter . i love your writing style and how you dont write with "like" as every other word. oh please update soon but in the meantime i am going to try not to skip all of my classes so that i can read this story and happy spring break where ever you are but i'm in houston, texas usalove karla
3/9/2006 c7 1Lil Bazza
You get two weeks off for the Commonwealth Games? Life is so not fair. I've still got 6 more weeks till Easter holidays.
Stupid Sydney schools and their lack of giving us holidays.
Anyway, it was a great chapter.
Though I forgot who Dan was. And he was mean. And why doesn't Gabriel ask Silence what happened?
And why is her name Silence?
Anyway,
Update soon and have a great holiday.
Cheer,
Jen (Baz)
1Lil BazzaYou get two weeks off for the Commonwealth Games? Life is so not fair. I've still got 6 more weeks till Easter holidays.
Stupid Sydney schools and their lack of giving us holidays.
Anyway, it was a great chapter.
Though I forgot who Dan was. And he was mean. And why doesn't Gabriel ask Silence what happened?
And why is her name Silence?
Anyway,
Update soon and have a great holiday.
Cheer,
Jen (Baz)
3/9/2006 c7 Mi
I think your story is my absolute favorite on fictionpress...Keep up the great job! update soon!
I think your story is my absolute favorite on fictionpress...Keep up the great job! update soon!
3/9/2006 c7 minute-glass
i didn't know that you updated chapter 6, so when i found out that there were two chapters for me to read, i was so happy =D anyway, is gabriel ever going to find out that silence was drugged? it would be nice if he did. and silence should say yes to a relationship! =] i love seeing them together. i was just wondering though... how many chapters are left? this seemed like the climax of the story, where everything well apart, so i was wondering if its ending soon or not cuz its only chapter 7. well, have fun on vacation! =D
i didn't know that you updated chapter 6, so when i found out that there were two chapters for me to read, i was so happy =D anyway, is gabriel ever going to find out that silence was drugged? it would be nice if he did. and silence should say yes to a relationship! =] i love seeing them together. i was just wondering though... how many chapters are left? this seemed like the climax of the story, where everything well apart, so i was wondering if its ending soon or not cuz its only chapter 7. well, have fun on vacation! =D
3/9/2006 c7 7Queai Kumosse
O_O Smex. I mean... *coughs* Anyway! ^_^; Hawtness. XD For a chapter. YEY! Constructive criticism? ...There is none. XD Aww, they're so adorable and cute and perfect and... ._. ...( ...The end. xD
7Queai KumosseO_O Smex. I mean... *coughs* Anyway! ^_^; Hawtness. XD For a chapter. YEY! Constructive criticism? ...There is none. XD Aww, they're so adorable and cute and perfect and... ._. ...( ...The end. xD
3/5/2006 c6 Queai Kumosse
...*wonders exactly when you updated* ...*and why I didn't get an alert!* XD Poo, my top reviewer status has left. *bows* ANYWAY, awesome chapter. o_o; D Haa. XD I wouldn't change anything about this chapter. *_* ... Anyway. I definitely want Silence to end up with Gabriel, ha. XD Dan sounds like he could be a fun interlude, though... I don't know, he's just trouble. ( And I think that maybe just Silence's point of view and maybe Gabriel's would be okay for the dance... Too many people would get confusing. x_x;; Update soon! :33
...*wonders exactly when you updated* ...*and why I didn't get an alert!* XD Poo, my top reviewer status has left. *bows* ANYWAY, awesome chapter. o_o; D Haa. XD I wouldn't change anything about this chapter. *_* ... Anyway. I definitely want Silence to end up with Gabriel, ha. XD Dan sounds like he could be a fun interlude, though... I don't know, he's just trouble. ( And I think that maybe just Silence's point of view and maybe Gabriel's would be okay for the dance... Too many people would get confusing. x_x;; Update soon! :33
3/1/2006 c6 7Juniper Nights
Definatly Gabriel!lol i love him! Dan on the other hand is...i dont know...its almost like he only wants her because shes Gabriels. And i like Gabriels personality more:) hehe so Gabriel for the long run!
7Juniper NightsDefinatly Gabriel!lol i love him! Dan on the other hand is...i dont know...its almost like he only wants her because shes Gabriels. And i like Gabriels personality more:) hehe so Gabriel for the long run!
2/26/2006 c6 just a nobody
heyy! this is my FAVORIT STORY (no joke). But Si should TOTALLY end up with Gabriel. if she doesnt ill cry. The dance? hm. perhaps some jealousy between dan and gabriel! fist fights are always fun! no? hah, well they are. well, make it good and update fast! or i shall simply die of anxiety! -just a no one
heyy! this is my FAVORIT STORY (no joke). But Si should TOTALLY end up with Gabriel. if she doesnt ill cry. The dance? hm. perhaps some jealousy between dan and gabriel! fist fights are always fun! no? hah, well they are. well, make it good and update fast! or i shall simply die of anxiety! -just a no one