for Snow in the Desert2/21/2007 c1 
80The Magician Joseph
woah
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the intregue
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the style
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so sharp you can write better than ninety percent of the shitty half-baked authors on the shelves!
damn good
great personification!
the drama!
80The Magician Josephwoah
!
the intregue
!
the style
!
so sharp you can write better than ninety percent of the shitty half-baked authors on the shelves!
damn good
great personification!
the drama!
10/26/2005 c1 23Damien Vlashtov
Excellent. I like the way you tell the story backwards, almost like the movie "Memento" ( you really should watch it, if you haven't ). Do keep on writing, I am impressed.
23Damien VlashtovExcellent. I like the way you tell the story backwards, almost like the movie "Memento" ( you really should watch it, if you haven't ). Do keep on writing, I am impressed.