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2/4/2006 c3 9GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
Still a little confused... Hmm, I suppose I'll have to read more, won't I?

I need to run, but I'll continue reading next time I can...

This was really wonderful. *crowd cheering*

Keep up the good work...

Agh! Rush, rush, rush and more rushing still...

~Martel/Gryph
2/4/2006 c2 GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
Okay day, that was a little confusing...

Really good with your descriptions of the culture, wilds and gryphons... *chuckle*

The whole bit about the gems was really good, but I am just as confused as Alida about this whole platinum thing...

Very original is all I can say...

~Martel/Gryph
2/4/2006 c1 GryphonFledglingOfSilverWings
Hi Gryph!

Sorry it has taken me so long to get around to reading your story (s) but my life has been one big whirlpool for the past few weeks and may be for sometime...

Anyway... This was really excellent. It was a little hard to understand the beginning at first, because it all goes by pretty quickly, but otherwise, this was a great read.

My impression so far is that possibly the baron Miskavel is the one controlling Leil, metaphorically if not literally controlling his body, for a chance to be a councellor to the king... But this has only been the first chapter, so I suppose it will someday all be revealed...

Well, I'm off to read the next chapter.. Excellent work, I applaud you...

~Martel/Gryph
2/2/2006 c11 10Teshgirl
Hey, welcome back, Gryph! ^^ When I signed on to my email a few days ago, I was pleasantly surprised. Soo... on to the review. :D

Oo, the Damnably Dry and Cold Place... I get cold just thinking about it. *shiver* One time where I live, a coupla years ago, the weather was negative 40. Yep. So, I know how Alida feels...

Alida has bruises? :O Hmmn... I think they're dragon scales, mebe... but we'll find out, right? ^_^

Tamen! :O I was wondering when we would see him again.

^^ Eagerly awaiting your next update,

Tesh : )
2/1/2006 c11 Celyn
Mis-typed a couple of words... spellcheckers are your friends.

It's good... the characters are meeting! Yayness!
2/1/2006 c11 Nam
Yah! I'm so glad that you updated! I was beginning to become scared that you wouldn't... another great and awe-inspiring chapter, and I hope that the next one comes maybe a little sooner *hopeful look* :D Until next time -Nam
2/1/2006 c11 12Lccorp2
Harr.

Archdemon Lord Duffikus:

Well, I'll be sure to pass on the message to my Creator...

Did you revise the chapter since Shadowhound reviewed? Hmm...

Just a question. Exactly what kind of terrain is the Damnable Cold and Dry place modelled after?
1/31/2006 c11 4Phoenix Wing
You've returned! :claps with glee: Excellent chapter. Tamen! Yay! ^_^ Interesting the bruising...I still love the Damnably Dry and Cold Place. Excellent name. So...trapped on Pinball you were? Frankly, I'm not at all surprised. That stuff gets addicting pretty fast. I totally forgot to read "Into the Skies"...:smacks head: And now I still can't because I'm reading Pride and Prejudice and also, of all subjects, a book for Honors Biology. I hate that class. The teacher is out to get me to fail. Glad you're back!
1/31/2006 c11 13Shadowhound
it has been five years since Tamen passed Alida on the road when he went to the Wilds. It doens't matter how good her memory is, she shouldn't be able to remember him from the thiry seconds she say of him five years ago. it does add a nice ending to the chapter, but it doesn't really make sense.

when you have the Greenmaster show Alida her room, he says that she can't share it with her uncle. you don't have anything previous to tell that the Greenmaster knows that Broachan is not Alida's father. you actually go to a point to make sure he thinks Broachan IS her father. then when you have the Greenmaster saying "your uncle", you just skip over any form of explanation...does that make any sense? basically, you have a small inconsistency about four fifths into the chapter concerning the Greenmaster's knoledge of Broachan and Alida's relationship. i said that again because i don't think i got my point across the first time. It didn't even make sense to ME. anyway, other than those two errors, techniqually one, it was an excellent chapter. remind me to thank Lccorp2 for getting you back to Word. update soon please.

Shadowhound
1/31/2006 c11 2Casey Drake
OH, SWEET!

Awesome. And now TWO of them meet...

awesome.

:) CD
12/28/2005 c1 35The Fourth Fate
O wow. Very interesting. I love Tamen. He's so smart and nobley. Anyway I have to go so I can't leave too long of a review but I'll be back for more. Great chapter. I really like the title.

.Bitter.Sweet.1991.
12/10/2005 c2 Lepistes
This is GREAT! Sorry for not reading it earlier, I had a few things to take care of. It sounds very interesting, even though I've just read the first two chapters. I don't understand a lot of things though... for instance, why do women and teenage girls eat platinium? And what exactly is vyrae? I guess I'll just have to read on and see.
12/5/2005 c10 10Teshgirl
Ah, cool! Aran and Mor meet Duana. ^^ This is getting fun!

Hey Gryph (If I may call you that), I have a question. I really like to draw characters, and I was wondering if I could draw Alida for you? I have an art webpage. I would definitely give you credit for the character. If you don't want me to, that's fine. ^^ I have a little idea for drawing Alida in winter clothes...

Looking forward to the next update! :D

Tesh : )
12/5/2005 c9 Teshgirl
Woah. Alida's in more danger now than I realised. Hope everything works out. Btw, I love how her name sounds.

Now, what's a Fiacra...? SUSPENSE! XD Ah well, we'll find out, eh? ^^

*checks time again* Yay, I still have time to read the next chapter and get caught up! Then I'll get started on Into the Skies soon. :D

Tesh : )
12/5/2005 c8 Teshgirl
Once again, I apologize for the late review. : ( But! First semester is over soon, and I'll have time to catch up! ^_^

Hmmn, I'm a little confused with the whole dreamwalker concept. For example, when Leil goes into the dreamscape, is it like going into a separate world? Just wondering. But your descriptions of how Duana can enter Leil's body were great.

Duana... *looks sadly out the window*

*checks time* I think I have time to read another chappie or two! Yay.

Tesh : )
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