for lunar eclipse makes me think of you10/23/2005 c1 
94smile persephone
The first stanza is oh-so lovely. I adore the entire poem, though. The imagery is ethereal in a way. Nicely written!
94smile persephoneThe first stanza is oh-so lovely. I adore the entire poem, though. The imagery is ethereal in a way. Nicely written!
10/23/2005 c1 236mezzie
I really like the premise that you began with, the clouds around the moon and then clearing. You captured a combined feeling of moonlit awe mixed up with missing and loneliness. the two lines "painful realizations" and "pitiful condensation" played off one another really well. I love the wishing *sigh*voice it made me feel :)
mezzie
236mezzieI really like the premise that you began with, the clouds around the moon and then clearing. You captured a combined feeling of moonlit awe mixed up with missing and loneliness. the two lines "painful realizations" and "pitiful condensation" played off one another really well. I love the wishing *sigh*voice it made me feel :)
mezzie