12/29/2005 c1 6Emotionlessxix
Hey, thanks for reviewing my one-shot "If Only" btw.
Anyway, I really liked this one! Rant or not, I can TOTALLY relate to it! There was this girl like that in our school...lol. Anyway as always, I shook her off at last! Anyway, great story! I really love the way it was written!
Hey, thanks for reviewing my one-shot "If Only" btw.
Anyway, I really liked this one! Rant or not, I can TOTALLY relate to it! There was this girl like that in our school...lol. Anyway as always, I shook her off at last! Anyway, great story! I really love the way it was written!
11/11/2005 c1 203Shades Of Autumn
Ahh...wonderful. You write very well, the flow of the piece is nicely managed. You might call it a rant but I think it's something much more. And yes that girl was a total bitch. Well done for getting rid of her. And thanks for the review!
Ahh...wonderful. You write very well, the flow of the piece is nicely managed. You might call it a rant but I think it's something much more. And yes that girl was a total bitch. Well done for getting rid of her. And thanks for the review!
10/24/2005 c1 lostgirluk
sorry i cant be bother to sign in, but well done for getting this off your chest, i have never been bullied by someone my own age, or anywhere near that so i have only a small idea what its like. well written and good use of language to portray the anger.
sorry i cant be bother to sign in, but well done for getting this off your chest, i have never been bullied by someone my own age, or anywhere near that so i have only a small idea what its like. well written and good use of language to portray the anger.
10/24/2005 c1 1jasilcock
Ah, doesn't everyone feel like this occasionally? :)
Well it's good you got this off your chest, Melinda sounds like a complete bitch...but this isn't a Live Journal so I'll leave that out.
Anyway, even though this is a rant it's a very well-written one! You've really invoked a reaction from the reader, well done. It's good that something positive has come out of her bullying :) Keep rantin'.
Ah, doesn't everyone feel like this occasionally? :)
Well it's good you got this off your chest, Melinda sounds like a complete bitch...but this isn't a Live Journal so I'll leave that out.
Anyway, even though this is a rant it's a very well-written one! You've really invoked a reaction from the reader, well done. It's good that something positive has come out of her bullying :) Keep rantin'.