for Shed A Tear2/26/2007 c1 
174a silenced revolution
This is so sad. : Great poem with a lot of feeling.
I'm a little confused by the line "shed a tear the who's life,". It seems like "shed a tear for who's life," might make more sense. Maybe just me tho.
Great job, write on!
~:Isabella May:~
174a silenced revolutionThis is so sad. : Great poem with a lot of feeling.
I'm a little confused by the line "shed a tear the who's life,". It seems like "shed a tear for who's life," might make more sense. Maybe just me tho.
Great job, write on!
~:Isabella May:~
11/15/2005 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
wow that struck me in the heart. i was reading and planning some witty commit and the ending was just mind blowing. coolsville. WRITE ON! o =
ps. yes, yes, i am desprate for reviews. it's rather pathetic.
119Whisper on the Lipswow that struck me in the heart. i was reading and planning some witty commit and the ending was just mind blowing. coolsville. WRITE ON! o =
ps. yes, yes, i am desprate for reviews. it's rather pathetic.
10/25/2005 c1 Princess Kitty Carla
Beautiful. T-T
Beautiful. T-T