for queen of the dolls1/6/2006 c1 hoowdoideletethisaccount
Wow, this poem is just overflowing with cultural imagery. It's very interesting to hear perspectives from all different people, and I'm so fascinated by history and culture... I love how you captured such things, in this little piece. I could breathe in the images. They were real.
"curiosity, dazzling / tiny, nimble hands spin artful tales / weaving legends with memories and beaming young stars"
Very beautifully-written.they dance to sweet-stringed sitars, sand-encrusted drums
Wow, this poem is just overflowing with cultural imagery. It's very interesting to hear perspectives from all different people, and I'm so fascinated by history and culture... I love how you captured such things, in this little piece. I could breathe in the images. They were real.
"curiosity, dazzling / tiny, nimble hands spin artful tales / weaving legends with memories and beaming young stars"
Very beautifully-written.they dance to sweet-stringed sitars, sand-encrusted drums
1/1/2006 c1 
12Seeking Sight
Absolutely beautiful! You have a wonderful talent for getting across vivid imagery. Keep it up! =)
12Seeking SightAbsolutely beautiful! You have a wonderful talent for getting across vivid imagery. Keep it up! =)
11/25/2005 c1 12364 unbirthdays
[Allow me to start out by saying that I admire your style of writing!]This is beautiful! 'weaving legends with memories and beaming young stars': great way to put it. right on! keep up the great work.
12364 unbirthdays[Allow me to start out by saying that I admire your style of writing!]This is beautiful! 'weaving legends with memories and beaming young stars': great way to put it. right on! keep up the great work.
11/1/2005 c1 64not sure yet
pretty imagery, it's very halloween ish, really like the line weaving legends with memories and beaming young stars, it has a really nice flow to it as well, mcuhly enjoyable, excellent job
64not sure yetpretty imagery, it's very halloween ish, really like the line weaving legends with memories and beaming young stars, it has a really nice flow to it as well, mcuhly enjoyable, excellent job
10/30/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
Your talent is amazing. Your writing is stunning. Before you had even said the word 'indian', I could practically taste the culture. The words and imagery in this practically make my mouth water.
Keep up the fabulous writing.Hillary
58White Tea and GingerYour talent is amazing. Your writing is stunning. Before you had even said the word 'indian', I could practically taste the culture. The words and imagery in this practically make my mouth water.
Keep up the fabulous writing.Hillary
10/26/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
I like it.. beautifully written.. I love it
btw thanks for telling me which of my poems was your favorite.. I appreciate it a lot
612simpleplan13I like it.. beautifully written.. I love it
btw thanks for telling me which of my poems was your favorite.. I appreciate it a lot
10/25/2005 c1 2philoslove
what to say but dazzling? dazzling diction, oh yes, indeed I myself can see the children dancing.
dazzling.
2philoslovewhat to say but dazzling? dazzling diction, oh yes, indeed I myself can see the children dancing.
dazzling.