for One Night Lover10/25/2005 c1 
281ThisCut-UpAngel
This really hits home-such a simple way to describe something that causes so much confusion. Great job!
281ThisCut-UpAngelThis really hits home-such a simple way to describe something that causes so much confusion. Great job!
10/25/2005 c1 8Amber Hill
we're all in a melancholic mood, aren't we?
now, i'm not sure if i should take this poem literally or not, but knowing you, i know that [a one night stand] was impossible. so i'm just gonna look at this.. umm... poetically? hm.
structure-wise, the stanzas were cut up so it shoulda been choppy, but in fact it sounded smooth, almost rhythmic (good poems don't rhyme, eh?). when read aloud it's like a song, a moody ditty... how long did it take you to come up with this? bravo =)
8Amber Hillwe're all in a melancholic mood, aren't we?
now, i'm not sure if i should take this poem literally or not, but knowing you, i know that [a one night stand] was impossible. so i'm just gonna look at this.. umm... poetically? hm.
structure-wise, the stanzas were cut up so it shoulda been choppy, but in fact it sounded smooth, almost rhythmic (good poems don't rhyme, eh?). when read aloud it's like a song, a moody ditty... how long did it take you to come up with this? bravo =)