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10/25/2005 c1 281ThisCut-UpAngel
A fantastic metaphor and good imagery. Good job!
10/25/2005 c1 60dollface and her cancer
I like this. Love this. Adore this. The questioning ("I feel like I've accomplished something") to the sardonic accusations ("sound familiar") are seamlessly woven into the metaphor/comparison of smoking. The relationship itself is so tangible: kudos to you for this piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
10/25/2005 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Very sexually graphic at some points, but overall a really nice simile between smoking and... well, you know. Nice job.

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