for A Collection of Short Stories2/5/2006 c2 
39SliversofSilverPain
I like how you've put it in the viewpoint of an old man; it's refreshing. I like the way you have it in present tense, but he's reminscing. Interesting. Well written
39SliversofSilverPainI like how you've put it in the viewpoint of an old man; it's refreshing. I like the way you have it in present tense, but he's reminscing. Interesting. Well written