for The Greatest Review Ever3/27/2006 c5 
6Stanley Joseph Morgan
you have said here what i wish i could put into such well stated form. this form of satire is beyond my capabilities, i would find myself resorting to vulgarities, which given my work, results in quite an interesting variety. but your approach is endlessly entertaining, far more constructive, and a great way to spend ones time, whether reading or writing. i look forward to more.
6Stanley Joseph Morganyou have said here what i wish i could put into such well stated form. this form of satire is beyond my capabilities, i would find myself resorting to vulgarities, which given my work, results in quite an interesting variety. but your approach is endlessly entertaining, far more constructive, and a great way to spend ones time, whether reading or writing. i look forward to more.
3/23/2006 c9 10Bressa
omg! friggin' hilarious!
i am a little concerned, however, because not too long ago an anonymous reviewer using your name threatened to feed me to alligators. did you really send that? because i really can't see what that had to do with what i wrote...
10Bressaomg! friggin' hilarious!
i am a little concerned, however, because not too long ago an anonymous reviewer using your name threatened to feed me to alligators. did you really send that? because i really can't see what that had to do with what i wrote...
3/17/2006 c9 MaxKrugmanHater
The song thing was kind of weak... but all in all it was OK. I do wish you would go back to what 'season one' was all about... because let's face it, everybody gets flamed. And nobody likes it, therefore you are providing mass entertainment by bashing the 'haters'. Could you perhaps do a segment on reviewers who do constructive criticism, who do a good job? I'm not asking for much derivation from the story, maybe one chapter (episode)...
Do the kirby! ^(^^) (^^)
The song thing was kind of weak... but all in all it was OK. I do wish you would go back to what 'season one' was all about... because let's face it, everybody gets flamed. And nobody likes it, therefore you are providing mass entertainment by bashing the 'haters'. Could you perhaps do a segment on reviewers who do constructive criticism, who do a good job? I'm not asking for much derivation from the story, maybe one chapter (episode)...
Do the kirby! ^(^^) (^^)
3/16/2006 c9 78WinterDeity
Amazing once again AVDA! The only thing I'd change was the having the name sometimes to the side of the spoken parts. I'm not one hundred percent sure of this, but I'm pretty sure it's supposed to always be on top. Whatever, it does nothing to distract from the writing itself. Great job, bitch. (And maybe I shouldn't)
78WinterDeityAmazing once again AVDA! The only thing I'd change was the having the name sometimes to the side of the spoken parts. I'm not one hundred percent sure of this, but I'm pretty sure it's supposed to always be on top. Whatever, it does nothing to distract from the writing itself. Great job, bitch. (And maybe I shouldn't)
3/15/2006 c9 220Namir Swiftpaw
Heh, silly.
Hoory for being pretentious! It's an epidemic on this site!
~Namir Swiftpaw
220Namir SwiftpawHeh, silly.
Hoory for being pretentious! It's an epidemic on this site!
~Namir Swiftpaw
3/15/2006 c9 1Formerly
Your last chapter was promising, but here you've fallen quite a ways. First of all, while your vendetta is in a way almost gratifying, it's starting to get a bit dull. Second, you didn't write more than a few words of this. I wouldn't mind that if it was funny, but this isn't even that.
By the way, it's "Viewers," not "Viewer's."
1FormerlyYour last chapter was promising, but here you've fallen quite a ways. First of all, while your vendetta is in a way almost gratifying, it's starting to get a bit dull. Second, you didn't write more than a few words of this. I wouldn't mind that if it was funny, but this isn't even that.
By the way, it's "Viewers," not "Viewer's."
3/12/2006 c1 7amazingal69
NIce and funny. Way to make fun of FLames to. Thanks for reviewing my stuff.CYA:P
7amazingal69NIce and funny. Way to make fun of FLames to. Thanks for reviewing my stuff.CYA:P
3/10/2006 c5 6MrFlames
Ah, I've forgotten how nice it is to have a half-page response to one line. It's ironic you bring up chapter 4, considering how libelous that was. Oh well.
6MrFlamesAh, I've forgotten how nice it is to have a half-page response to one line. It's ironic you bring up chapter 4, considering how libelous that was. Oh well.
3/9/2006 c8 5A Very Disappointed Author
Ah,so good to hear from you again Flamsey poo...trying to draw another to the dark side are we?
I re-read the first chapter of my piece after I saw you use the word "plagiarizes", simply because I didn't fully remember what element of your poor writing I choose to highlight in my piece...I mean The Greatest Review Ever has been so very successful that I hardly remember the very first episode.
So, I went back and re-read it, and well...to be honest...theres no plagiarism at all. I though maybe I had made the err, but it turns out you're just trying to turn heads with another unfulfilled accusation (for those of you unfamiliar with those, see "The Greatest Review Ever, Episode 4")
Yes, I may have poked fun at your work, and yes I most definitly parodied it, however there is no plagiarism at all.
I highlighted your unecessarily excessive use of the word "bitch" but will you then allege that any work on Fictionpress that uses the word "bitch" is therefore plagairizing your futile attempt at literature?
Dumb question, of course YOU would.
However I just thought I'd make clear there is no plagiarism in my piece...sorry to burst your bubble.
The One, The Only~AVDA
5A Very Disappointed AuthorAh,so good to hear from you again Flamsey poo...trying to draw another to the dark side are we?
I re-read the first chapter of my piece after I saw you use the word "plagiarizes", simply because I didn't fully remember what element of your poor writing I choose to highlight in my piece...I mean The Greatest Review Ever has been so very successful that I hardly remember the very first episode.
So, I went back and re-read it, and well...to be honest...theres no plagiarism at all. I though maybe I had made the err, but it turns out you're just trying to turn heads with another unfulfilled accusation (for those of you unfamiliar with those, see "The Greatest Review Ever, Episode 4")
Yes, I may have poked fun at your work, and yes I most definitly parodied it, however there is no plagiarism at all.
I highlighted your unecessarily excessive use of the word "bitch" but will you then allege that any work on Fictionpress that uses the word "bitch" is therefore plagairizing your futile attempt at literature?
Dumb question, of course YOU would.
However I just thought I'd make clear there is no plagiarism in my piece...sorry to burst your bubble.
The One, The Only~AVDA
3/8/2006 c8 6MrFlames
WinterDeity, if you think the technique of adding "bitch" to the end of every line that AVDA plagiarizes in this piece is amusing, maybe you should try reading the original essay. ;)
6MrFlamesWinterDeity, if you think the technique of adding "bitch" to the end of every line that AVDA plagiarizes in this piece is amusing, maybe you should try reading the original essay. ;)
3/8/2006 c1 9HereWeGoTINOLY
I love this! I gotta keep reading. Have you read Max Krugman's new essay? It's called "On Proper Reviewing Technique". You could do a whole episode on the pure hypocrisy of that piece alone (piece with a double meaning, of course). But keep up the good work!
9HereWeGoTINOLYI love this! I gotta keep reading. Have you read Max Krugman's new essay? It's called "On Proper Reviewing Technique". You could do a whole episode on the pure hypocrisy of that piece alone (piece with a double meaning, of course). But keep up the good work!