for this is relief, not jelousy11/10/2005 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
This is gorgeous. I love everything about it. The words you chose are so perfect, and everything about it is just nice. I love it.
871no.peace.los.angelesThis is gorgeous. I love everything about it. The words you chose are so perfect, and everything about it is just nice. I love it.
11/9/2005 c1 28always gats b y
ha, the irony. nicely written, good choice of words... short but thought provoking. i like this.
xo - Rei
28always gats b yha, the irony. nicely written, good choice of words... short but thought provoking. i like this.
xo - Rei
10/28/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
*smile*
you have such infectous poetry. I must say this is gorgeous. incredibly short but poignant. lovelovelove the title ["this is relief, not jealousy"]. you create a mesmerising mood and well depicted sense, but the irony in this is so sharp. love it.
~* noelle
90poetic abortion*smile*
you have such infectous poetry. I must say this is gorgeous. incredibly short but poignant. lovelovelove the title ["this is relief, not jealousy"]. you create a mesmerising mood and well depicted sense, but the irony in this is so sharp. love it.
~* noelle
10/27/2005 c1 80citrus scented
this is relief not jelousy...love it. it tells so much, of a stale half-baked and bad relationship and the relief of being let go. i like it, as usual wonderful descriptions.
80citrus scentedthis is relief not jelousy...love it. it tells so much, of a stale half-baked and bad relationship and the relief of being let go. i like it, as usual wonderful descriptions.
10/27/2005 c1 26Elizabeth Ebony
quite a bit of sarcasm/irony there.This is just lovely.Delicious,almost.Write on :)
E.Ebony
26Elizabeth Ebonyquite a bit of sarcasm/irony there.This is just lovely.Delicious,almost.Write on :)
E.Ebony
10/27/2005 c1 6Gilee7
I found this quite funny in like a dark, twisted kind of way.
-it’s a (pretend?) chopstick war of love&hate&/every impassive afternoon in between.- I love those lines!
And the ending! Those last three lines are gold! I love that bitter sarcasm. This is quite a nice poem. Excellent, brain-twisting rhythm and a bitter little personality. I really enjoyed it.
6Gilee7I found this quite funny in like a dark, twisted kind of way.
-it’s a (pretend?) chopstick war of love&hate&/every impassive afternoon in between.- I love those lines!
And the ending! Those last three lines are gold! I love that bitter sarcasm. This is quite a nice poem. Excellent, brain-twisting rhythm and a bitter little personality. I really enjoyed it.
10/26/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
so I’m a purer shade of his nasty, dirty:. smile.-Love that line; you create a mesmerizing mood in this piece.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless Julietso I’m a purer shade of his nasty, dirty:. smile.-Love that line; you create a mesmerizing mood in this piece.
Juliet.