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10/2/2006 c1 123mobman
woah...
2/5/2006 c1 23Fina Arvanthol
AMAZING! I absolutely loved this poem. It was definitely one of your BEST! The repetition of panic in the beginning totally built a foundation of suspense; I love how you used words like "pearly" and "ivory" to describe the pills, and the twist at the end-fantastic! I commend you for this poem; it was simply superb!
10/26/2005 c1 12Lostwind
It was a little hard to understand at first, but by like mid-poem, I could understand, it was very good.
10/26/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Kind of morbid; but I like the style that you attacked this subject with. I was in a really bad car crash and they put me on anti-depressants; but I couldn't write anything when I was on them so I was like "Goodbye!" I like this though, that panic for something that numbs you. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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