for Black Roses5/2/2021 c1 HeyCharles
Great job author, I really like your writing style. I suggest you publish your book in NovelStar, a lot of readers will love your work.
Great job author, I really like your writing style. I suggest you publish your book in NovelStar, a lot of readers will love your work.
2/25/2011 c14 Barbie826
With the music, I have a feeling you watched Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants.
With the music, I have a feeling you watched Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants.
2/25/2011 c8 Barbie826
Too many flashbacks and flash fowards and time changes. It also takes away a lot of suspense.
Too many flashbacks and flash fowards and time changes. It also takes away a lot of suspense.
8/10/2006 c17 Saniaaa
omg! ur finished! i love this story! i so loved logan tho but he died.:sob:. anywayz you have to write Hallmark Moments! I was thinking of writing a story similar to this. You know, friends with benefits but oh well. keep writing!
omg! ur finished! i love this story! i so loved logan tho but he died.:sob:. anywayz you have to write Hallmark Moments! I was thinking of writing a story similar to this. You know, friends with benefits but oh well. keep writing!
8/9/2006 c16 CuteButPshycho27
Okay, first of all...HOW DARE YOU KILL LOGAN!
Okay, over it...
AH! Yay! I lurved it. Although everything happened to fast for one chapter, but I still liked it. And the end..ah...YAY! Update soon!
Okay, first of all...HOW DARE YOU KILL LOGAN!
Okay, over it...
AH! Yay! I lurved it. Although everything happened to fast for one chapter, but I still liked it. And the end..ah...YAY! Update soon!
8/9/2006 c16 dyingofluv
Yay! No! Cliff! Cliff CLiff! NOO! I must know whats going to happen next ! :}
Yay! No! Cliff! Cliff CLiff! NOO! I must know whats going to happen next ! :}
7/21/2006 c15 
2minimimi
hey! eek! this story is getting exciting! keep writing! chris needs to come back though... i mean.. he can't Not come back! it is a love story after all! punish the dad instead! keep writing! i want to know what happens next!
2minimimihey! eek! this story is getting exciting! keep writing! chris needs to come back though... i mean.. he can't Not come back! it is a love story after all! punish the dad instead! keep writing! i want to know what happens next!
7/14/2006 c14 Monkebella
I usually dont tell my authors what to do with they're characters, but Bridget better not take that from her father of all people. Poor Chris would die if she walked out on him too. Please I want to see him HAPPY! They both deserve it... but I know that in any case that is drama so please dont stop writing; even if it hurts to see them get hurt. :-(
I usually dont tell my authors what to do with they're characters, but Bridget better not take that from her father of all people. Poor Chris would die if she walked out on him too. Please I want to see him HAPPY! They both deserve it... but I know that in any case that is drama so please dont stop writing; even if it hurts to see them get hurt. :-(
5/17/2006 c12 Rei
keep writing!
keep writing!
5/14/2006 c11 Rei
I really like this story! There is just one thing I feel I should point out (don't be offended!): You sometimes change between a narator and a character naration, and past and present tense. If you just watch for that stuff I am sure it will go away... I do the same thing, so dont hate me :O)All in all it is a great story, so keep writing!
I really like this story! There is just one thing I feel I should point out (don't be offended!): You sometimes change between a narator and a character naration, and past and present tense. If you just watch for that stuff I am sure it will go away... I do the same thing, so dont hate me :O)All in all it is a great story, so keep writing!
5/13/2006 c8 Rei
nice story, but Logan has a Hummer? No offense if you have one of course, I just think they waste gas...
nice story, but Logan has a Hummer? No offense if you have one of course, I just think they waste gas...
3/12/2006 c13 Ri
Can't wait to read more! Oh goody, cliches rock! lolz :P have fun in school while it lasts uni sucks :(
Can't wait to read more! Oh goody, cliches rock! lolz :P have fun in school while it lasts uni sucks :(
2/23/2006 c3 SilentRiver
I really like this story and can't wait to read more!
I really like this story and can't wait to read more!