for Metal and Body, Body and Soul10/26/2005 c1 
23Damien Vlashtov
I like the feeling of this piece, it works well with my spasm of insomnia at the moment. All I would change is the title. Maybe "metal and soul" ?
23Damien VlashtovI like the feeling of this piece, it works well with my spasm of insomnia at the moment. All I would change is the title. Maybe "metal and soul" ?
10/26/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
Delicious. I love how you wrote it in such simple wording when the subject is so complex. Great piece.
-Hillary-
58White Tea and GingerDelicious. I love how you wrote it in such simple wording when the subject is so complex. Great piece.
-Hillary-
10/26/2005 c1 94smile persephone
It's interesting how it's so blatantly obvious that the poem has more than one meaning. I love the dirtyromance imagery that the poem gives off as well. Nicely done!
94smile persephoneIt's interesting how it's so blatantly obvious that the poem has more than one meaning. I love the dirtyromance imagery that the poem gives off as well. Nicely done!