3/16/2006 c1 2florida
YaY!

I love how you turn all of these classical fairy tales into your own works of art. Its Amazing!

I'm sorry that I haven't been reading much of you works latley, you should be vary mad with me. go a head i deserve being yelled at.

Anyways back to your sotry! I'm starting to like this tom boyish valet, the prince is vary lucky to have her. *hint hint* I have no idea how your going to pull this fairy tale off it seems like a real challenge to me, but then again you've allways seem to work best with harder plots and all. How do you think up these ideas anyways?

I can't wait to read more, and that means that you better write the next chapter quick!

~florida

10/27/2005 c1 28Ivy Shoelaces
I'm kinda glad that you hanged her name. All Cinderella remakes use the name Ella, obviously. No matter how much I love that name, it is overused. I like the change.

Maybe wait a few chapters until you change the title. It makes perfect sense now. Maybe change it when something major or epic happens, having to do with Ashley.

And I think that short chapers are good for this type of story. Faerie tales are never that long. Those are all of my suggestions. Update soon!