for At the Starting Gate Again7/20/2011 c20 witeaya
the story had an interesting storyline and plot.
i love how u ease the story from scene to scene.
i know it's been years since u visited fp but i hope u will finish the story eventually.
the story had an interesting storyline and plot.
i love how u ease the story from scene to scene.
i know it's been years since u visited fp but i hope u will finish the story eventually.
10/24/2009 c4 MarieAnn
I had to go back and comment on this chapter too. I can't believe he slept with his wife and then left to go sleep with his mistress. That's just disgusting. Like I said before Trent is an a**hole.
I had to go back and comment on this chapter too. I can't believe he slept with his wife and then left to go sleep with his mistress. That's just disgusting. Like I said before Trent is an a**hole.
10/24/2009 c20 MarieAnn
Yay I'm happy that their relationship is out in the open. I understand that Lydia loved Trent but she definitely should not have given him a heads up just like he didn't for her. I agree with Bryan's POV on this. Well PLEASE Update again! I would love to read more! :-)
Yay I'm happy that their relationship is out in the open. I understand that Lydia loved Trent but she definitely should not have given him a heads up just like he didn't for her. I agree with Bryan's POV on this. Well PLEASE Update again! I would love to read more! :-)
10/24/2009 c19 MarieAnn
I feel so bad for Lydia. I can't believe people that go through a divorce and act horribly to the other person when they supposedly loved them for years. At least she has Bryan :-)
I feel so bad for Lydia. I can't believe people that go through a divorce and act horribly to the other person when they supposedly loved them for years. At least she has Bryan :-)
10/24/2009 c17 MarieAnn
Bryan is sweet. :-) I'm glad that Lydia is giving him a chance and that dream she had was cute.
Bryan is sweet. :-) I'm glad that Lydia is giving him a chance and that dream she had was cute.
10/24/2009 c16 MarieAnn
I adore Bryan. He sounds much better than Trent. I hope Lydia does consider dating him.
I adore Bryan. He sounds much better than Trent. I hope Lydia does consider dating him.
10/24/2009 c15 MarieAnn
I knew she was going to get pregnant! I really like Bryan and I hope Lydia will give him a chance :-)
Btw Trent is an a**
I knew she was going to get pregnant! I really like Bryan and I hope Lydia will give him a chance :-)
Btw Trent is an a**
8/4/2009 c20 Kajal
This story definitely brought me to tears on more than one occasion. I don't know if it was intentional or not but the fact that you portrayed Trent and their marriage as perfect in the first few chapters was brilliant, given that it was done on purpose. It made the divorce hit us just as hard and unexpectedly as it hit her. I know you wont be updating given the last one came 3 years ago but if you ever do, I'd love to read the rest.
This story definitely brought me to tears on more than one occasion. I don't know if it was intentional or not but the fact that you portrayed Trent and their marriage as perfect in the first few chapters was brilliant, given that it was done on purpose. It made the divorce hit us just as hard and unexpectedly as it hit her. I know you wont be updating given the last one came 3 years ago but if you ever do, I'd love to read the rest.
7/3/2009 c19 theundergrounddevil
WOAH! so much drama and love
WOAH! so much drama and love
7/3/2009 c19 whateverittakes
amazing! please update I wanna see more of bryan and lydia!
amazing! please update I wanna see more of bryan and lydia!
7/2/2009 c20 nopenadaziltch
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! Im like dying here I need to know what happens next. BTW this is an awesome story, your an amazing writer! =D
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! Im like dying here I need to know what happens next. BTW this is an awesome story, your an amazing writer! =D
7/4/2006 c20 Alenor
heya, i love this story so far. i don't know how trent could leave her like that! it made me cry to think of it, it's horrible that he could have done that to her, especially the night when he slept with her and then went and slept with his mistress. that's bloody awful! ahh well, please update soon ~ Alenor.
heya, i love this story so far. i don't know how trent could leave her like that! it made me cry to think of it, it's horrible that he could have done that to her, especially the night when he slept with her and then went and slept with his mistress. that's bloody awful! ahh well, please update soon ~ Alenor.
11/11/2006 c19 braeden
three chapters at once- yes!i can't believe what a jerk Trent was at the finalization about the divorce.i'm so happy Lydia has Bryan but I can't wait for there to be some more conflict.like how trent will react when he finds out about Lydia and Bryan?hm
three chapters at once- yes!i can't believe what a jerk Trent was at the finalization about the divorce.i'm so happy Lydia has Bryan but I can't wait for there to be some more conflict.like how trent will react when he finds out about Lydia and Bryan?hm