11/16/2005 c1 194Aslan Israel
Love the last line. So final, but begs for more. Nice job.

10/28/2005 c1 cassie
did u know that both this poem...and the other one...'same old tricks' (I REMEMBERED IT) ends in the same words. 'by you'. kinda odd? anyway. yeh i forgot the point of this review. oh yeh it was to say that. yeh. it was good.bye

10/28/2005 c1 i-miss-roses
The rhyming was amazing. It wasn't forced and that I love. And I can't say more than that right now...