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2FlashingBlades
Wow! This is sooo cool! I noticed that it was updated in 2007. . . that can't be good. . . you have to keep working on this one! Please I beg of you! Don't let the story end!
2FlashingBladesWow! This is sooo cool! I noticed that it was updated in 2007. . . that can't be good. . . you have to keep working on this one! Please I beg of you! Don't let the story end!
5/14/2011 c3 Daphne Auguste
Out of all your stories, I think I like this one the best (so far) because of all the tension and otherworldliness you build up in the beginning chapters.
Your characters are well-characterised and you keep the reader hooked for more.
You're pretty talented writer, you know?
Out of all your stories, I think I like this one the best (so far) because of all the tension and otherworldliness you build up in the beginning chapters.
Your characters are well-characterised and you keep the reader hooked for more.
You're pretty talented writer, you know?
2/16/2007 c1 Aerin001
Well to be perfectly honest I read this story completely on a whim. I probably would have stopped reading it after the first chapter if it hadn't been so utterly bizare and intriguing. Zachreal is one hell of an enigma, I'll give you that. I honestly have no idea what motivates him. Actually, I think that's why I like this story. You don't just go right ahead and make things blatantly obvious. There's a good deal of mystery involved. I like that. Well done!
I guess my only real complaint would be that in some places the "mystery" becomes just plain confusing. I'm not gonna go too in depth with that though seeing as you've only got 4 chapters up and you could very well answer my questions in the next chapters. So yeah, overall I'm liking it, and I'm very interested to see where you're going with this! Keep it up! :)
Well to be perfectly honest I read this story completely on a whim. I probably would have stopped reading it after the first chapter if it hadn't been so utterly bizare and intriguing. Zachreal is one hell of an enigma, I'll give you that. I honestly have no idea what motivates him. Actually, I think that's why I like this story. You don't just go right ahead and make things blatantly obvious. There's a good deal of mystery involved. I like that. Well done!
I guess my only real complaint would be that in some places the "mystery" becomes just plain confusing. I'm not gonna go too in depth with that though seeing as you've only got 4 chapters up and you could very well answer my questions in the next chapters. So yeah, overall I'm liking it, and I'm very interested to see where you're going with this! Keep it up! :)
7/22/2006 c4 Royal Bliss
Really cool story idea you have here, it kept me reading. It's different compared to most peoples on here which is why I liked it. Zachreal is a cool name and character by the way.
Really cool story idea you have here, it kept me reading. It's different compared to most peoples on here which is why I liked it. Zachreal is a cool name and character by the way.
5/23/2006 c4 12Rachel M. T
Oh wow oh wow oh wow! This is one of the BEST stories I have ever read! I really really want to know what's going to happen next! I love your characters and Zachreal is awesome! At first I thought he might be skitsophernic (I can't spell to save my life), but his world is real! Oh my gosh! Hurry up with the next chapter please!
12Rachel M. TOh wow oh wow oh wow! This is one of the BEST stories I have ever read! I really really want to know what's going to happen next! I love your characters and Zachreal is awesome! At first I thought he might be skitsophernic (I can't spell to save my life), but his world is real! Oh my gosh! Hurry up with the next chapter please!
3/9/2006 c4 7Blankppr
I got all into it. too bad there's not more. sigh* Good story so far, I like it, I'm really intrigued.
7BlankpprI got all into it. too bad there's not more. sigh* Good story so far, I like it, I'm really intrigued.
12/23/2005 c2 pink-soda-125
ooh i like it. it's very cool! the disxcription is great and then imagery is awesomeZ!
ooh i like it. it's very cool! the disxcription is great and then imagery is awesomeZ!
11/30/2005 c1 Arkash
Very interesting.
I like the childlike innoccence of this story with its touch of unreality.
Good job! *_*
Very interesting.
I like the childlike innoccence of this story with its touch of unreality.
Good job! *_*
11/21/2005 c3 Kendris
This has a lot of potential!
Zachreal is an intriguing character; almost autistic in his detachment, with some unsettling hints of the paranormal.
Warren's mix of love, fear, embarrassment and confusion is well done, as is the banter between the group of teens.
I'm ready to see the "secret spot"!
This has a lot of potential!
Zachreal is an intriguing character; almost autistic in his detachment, with some unsettling hints of the paranormal.
Warren's mix of love, fear, embarrassment and confusion is well done, as is the banter between the group of teens.
I'm ready to see the "secret spot"!
11/9/2005 c2 5Dark Shadow Lord
This is good. I like this fic, its really good and creative and derserves credit! Praise to you!
5Dark Shadow LordThis is good. I like this fic, its really good and creative and derserves credit! Praise to you!