for Angel of Fire9/13/2013 c1 
5Cornelius Kleve
your writing style is clipped but has a way of entangling me in a web. It had twist very unexpected and you kept me wondering what would happen ending was a complete surprise leaving me shocked. Lighting should have burned her alive and death of Celestia leaving him alone because he couldn't move on It would also have been a great ending. Loved It!
5Cornelius Kleveyour writing style is clipped but has a way of entangling me in a web. It had twist very unexpected and you kept me wondering what would happen ending was a complete surprise leaving me shocked. Lighting should have burned her alive and death of Celestia leaving him alone because he couldn't move on It would also have been a great ending. Loved It!
11/9/2005 c1 5kitty-mao-mao
0_0 you really like killing people off don't you? eh well...depressing child is all i have left to say. (and yes, it's during lunch i'm writing this! hehe!)
5kitty-mao-mao0_0 you really like killing people off don't you? eh well...depressing child is all i have left to say. (and yes, it's during lunch i'm writing this! hehe!)