for The Dance8/23/2006 c1 
6Job Cyclops
Hey, thanks for your review on my story. Your right, it is sort of personal, because the insomnia, the harsh childhood treatment, and all was real. I've always sort of been the 'freak' in my family, because I look so different.
Pedich Edhellen? *bounces 'appily*
Pelin pedi i lam edhellen.
But just a little. (^;*lalaith*
Bye now! Thanks again! Beautiful poem, it reminisced of LotR, I think. Your descriptions make one feel as if they were there! Good job.
6Job CyclopsHey, thanks for your review on my story. Your right, it is sort of personal, because the insomnia, the harsh childhood treatment, and all was real. I've always sort of been the 'freak' in my family, because I look so different.
Pedich Edhellen? *bounces 'appily*
Pelin pedi i lam edhellen.
But just a little. (^;*lalaith*
Bye now! Thanks again! Beautiful poem, it reminisced of LotR, I think. Your descriptions make one feel as if they were there! Good job.
12/24/2005 c1 148fergyness
i really liked this piece
none of the rhyming seemed strained or forced, and it puts a clear picture in my mind
you also used a unique rhyming scheme which made this all the better
B-E-A-utiful
148fergynessi really liked this piece
none of the rhyming seemed strained or forced, and it puts a clear picture in my mind
you also used a unique rhyming scheme which made this all the better
B-E-A-utiful
11/26/2005 c1 8flightless blackbird
wow that was beautiful. i love it. It flows so well, and although it rhymes, it doesnt seem to be forced. it all just... fits.
~Blackbird
8flightless blackbirdwow that was beautiful. i love it. It flows so well, and although it rhymes, it doesnt seem to be forced. it all just... fits.
~Blackbird
11/6/2005 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
I absolutely love this and it's going straight to my favorites. I like the symoblism, the beat, the descriptives, everything. Being emtirely nitpicky, the only mar to its rythem was this line, "Nothing to lose, nothing to hide" and only because you had to accent the wrongs syllable. But it's really beautiful. I have got to read more of your work.
20Pheobe MeryllI absolutely love this and it's going straight to my favorites. I like the symoblism, the beat, the descriptives, everything. Being emtirely nitpicky, the only mar to its rythem was this line, "Nothing to lose, nothing to hide" and only because you had to accent the wrongs syllable. But it's really beautiful. I have got to read more of your work.
10/31/2005 c1 132mizu no kokoro
a mystical kind of atmosphere~ i guess, we all wish we can be as carefre at times~ good work
keep writing!
132mizu no kokoroa mystical kind of atmosphere~ i guess, we all wish we can be as carefre at times~ good work
keep writing!
10/28/2005 c1 10Ridley Jack
Not the best poem I've ever read, though I'm not by far any sort of critic. I like it, though. Reminds me of my friend, who's also a dancer. If I had room, you would be on my fave list :P
10Ridley JackNot the best poem I've ever read, though I'm not by far any sort of critic. I like it, though. Reminds me of my friend, who's also a dancer. If I had room, you would be on my fave list :P