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1/8/2006 c1 54SirenThird
Wow, those are similar. Heh, great minds right? I liked how you sort of led up into the dialogue, it made it ring really clearly. I loved the last line as well, though I can't quite say why. Also, thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. Good luck and keep writing!
1/1/2006 c1 8gogodiscodancer
wow. what a great picture. i can really connect with it. nice job.
12/22/2005 c1 17amavian
You’ve given me a scene (a mental picture if you will) with this. I see a girl (women?) standing in the middle of a room full of furniture with something breakable in her hands. And you two are arguing and in a rage she throws the thing in her hands to the floor (for show, wanting to be dramatic, not really thinking that it would shatter) and afterward, she cares more about the object then the fight. Making the things outside of materialism obsolete.
12/20/2005 c1 879Moondog Dozier
excellent interior dialogue. Lines like, "And cut,- Until the grey turned blue again,", bring out the pain the dialogue eludes to.
10/28/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
Nicely written. ^_^ Write on!

~Anna~

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