for Time10/31/2005 c1 
237classic violet
"Time slowly edges forward / And becomes closer with each passing moment / My love for you is strong / Stronger then I could ever imagine / You are my future / My forever"
I loved it how you described this part.
"... slowly *edges* foward" I felt that putting "edge" in there made it so incredible.
Keep writing! And thank you so much for your review.
237classic violet"Time slowly edges forward / And becomes closer with each passing moment / My love for you is strong / Stronger then I could ever imagine / You are my future / My forever"
I loved it how you described this part.
"... slowly *edges* foward" I felt that putting "edge" in there made it so incredible.
Keep writing! And thank you so much for your review.