12/3/2005 c1 32pointythings
Wow, this is amazing! I love 'the thief that is each waking hour.' I'm not sure 'hind and 'lease are accepted abbreviations, but I'll allow it, since I knew what you meant. This really sounds like a Shakespearian sonnet. Nice work. Yours in writing, ~pointythings~

10/28/2005 c1 2MikiKM
That was a very cute poem. I liked the old style shakespearian time frame usage of words. And its all just describing fickle love. Not many people choose to do poetry in this style and it is a challenge to do. Good job