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1/14/2006 c1 83Nails For Your Crucifix
such harsh, wonderful, true words...
12/21/2005 c1 73Jezsh
the use of such powerful, ugly words describing things that could have once been beautiful makes this sound amazing. There are just so many lines here that strike you, some many unique words and phrases. Great work.
12/9/2005 c1 83Prevaricate
Fantastic. I like your style.

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12/1/2005 c1 115HauntedMisery
Whoa... wow, this is amazing and really good, great job!
11/7/2005 c1 68this is britt
those last four stanzas are stuck in my heart forever. you are AMAZING. let's get all Gwen Stefani: AMAZING! A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

I'd say your shit is bananas, but from what I've understood, bananas is a bad thing, unless I've misconstrued it. ;)
11/2/2005 c1 63lackluster
this is beautiful. and haunting, in a sense: i love that.
10/30/2005 c1 bitexmarks
girl you are GOOD!bitexmarks
10/30/2005 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
Last two lines...The whole thing left me speechless. But I'm a sucker for last lines.
10/29/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
fantastic. I am barely coherent as it is. love(ly).

~* noelle
10/29/2005 c1 79miss lavender
REALLY LOVELY! I was super-happy when that little Author Alert! thing popped up. This did not disappoint me, it was fantastic.. great job!

-lav
10/29/2005 c1 90WiltingBlackRose
That was REALLY good. I loved it.
10/29/2005 c1 68st. maverick
It's beautiful. The imagery is inequivocally the best part, I think, with this sort of odd rhythm and stream of thought-ties it all together. The line that got me was:

"and:i will become the red-headed juliet whose face you pictured on the wall above my head"

very well done.
10/29/2005 c1 28One Up
great

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