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for love in a body bag

3/20/2008 c1 sorryaboutthat
It's harsh and real and almost unreal in that reality...

I think

that you just ousted my all time favorite poem in favor of this one.

Congrats!
7/13/2006 c1 190apromptedpoet
Wow. I've read all your poems up to this one and I cannot believe I've never read you before.

Absolutely amazing.



Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
6/6/2006 c1 13Always Changing
Oh, I really love this. Just the way you put it all together is great.
3/9/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
suffocating in his bedside drawer

my god :| gorgeous desperate helpless imagery...

and isn't love just perfect curled inside a

sidewalk-chalk outline

i may love you. certainly, i love this poem - nay, i would marry this poem. it is GORGEOUS.
2/8/2006 c1 1The sky is going to eat us
11/9/2005 c1 1fay-black
that rocks. you are my new hero.
11/7/2005 c1 68this is britt
gosh Jess, it's like, fast-paced, BOOM, it exploded right in my face. you are so gifted. I loved your wordplay in here, the capital letters, it felt like you were screaming.
11/3/2005 c1 no one lives here anymore
This poem hit me like an eighteen wheeler carying a full load of bricks (which is a good thing). Excellent use of parantheses & such.
11/2/2005 c1 63lackluster
great work with the parentheses. they really have an impact.the wording too.
10/30/2005 c1 10NOY addict x3
Wow. That was amazing. The format you used is amazing. I've never seen poetry in a form like that.
10/30/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
fucking genius. I can't even think of words to describe how I feel. it's so pretty.

~* noelle
10/30/2005 c1 94smile persephone
I'm envious and in (awe). I lovelove "be(leave)". You're a genius, truly.

"Jesus in the Garden of Gethsemane" - Wow.

You should publish. I would buy.
10/30/2005 c1 55APersonAndAHalf
You never cease to amaze me.
10/29/2005 c1 twenty-second seduction
the format amazes me andthe use of vocabulary leaves me

speechless.

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