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3/21/2006 c1 CkShorty
Ok, lyric writer! I'm jealous. It's very good. Very good. Alot of emotion and alot of people can relate to such a thing and my favorite lines were:

You don’t know what you’ve done,

You love me as a friend

Can’t deal with either one

So I just play pretend,

‘Cause in my dreams

You love me

Basically verse two. Keep up the good work. You're talented.

2/9/2006 c1 26Meio
I adore this song...inspires me. May I use it in the story I am currently writting? (Its called System Error if you'd like to go look. )this makes me...feel..Like I'm seeing a person I love leave forever. Truly beautiful. Well done.
10/31/2005 c1 32JunipertheSwift
Whoa! I could hear it in my mind like a real song! You should submit it to an artist or something...
10/30/2005 c1 3Choice
Hey. Loved this. It's the first song fictionpress I've ever read, so congrats, you've pushed the interest of checking out other songs people've written. =)

You really should try to record this into a file so people can hear it. =/ I really am interested in hearing how the tuning, rhythm and beat goes. ^^

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