for Stranger3/21/2006 c1 CkShorty
Ok, lyric writer! I'm jealous. It's very good. Very good. Alot of emotion and alot of people can relate to such a thing and my favorite lines were:
You don’t know what you’ve done,
You love me as a friend
Can’t deal with either one
So I just play pretend,
‘Cause in my dreams
You love me
Basically verse two. Keep up the good work. You're talented.
CK
Ok, lyric writer! I'm jealous. It's very good. Very good. Alot of emotion and alot of people can relate to such a thing and my favorite lines were:
You don’t know what you’ve done,
You love me as a friend
Can’t deal with either one
So I just play pretend,
‘Cause in my dreams
You love me
Basically verse two. Keep up the good work. You're talented.
CK
2/9/2006 c1 
26Meio
I adore this song...inspires me. May I use it in the story I am currently writting? (Its called System Error if you'd like to go look. )this makes me...feel..Like I'm seeing a person I love leave forever. Truly beautiful. Well done.
26MeioI adore this song...inspires me. May I use it in the story I am currently writting? (Its called System Error if you'd like to go look. )this makes me...feel..Like I'm seeing a person I love leave forever. Truly beautiful. Well done.
10/31/2005 c1 32JunipertheSwift
Whoa! I could hear it in my mind like a real song! You should submit it to an artist or something...
32JunipertheSwiftWhoa! I could hear it in my mind like a real song! You should submit it to an artist or something...
10/30/2005 c1 3Choice
Hey. Loved this. It's the first song fictionpress I've ever read, so congrats, you've pushed the interest of checking out other songs people've written. =)
You really should try to record this into a file so people can hear it. =/ I really am interested in hearing how the tuning, rhythm and beat goes. ^^
3ChoiceHey. Loved this. It's the first song fictionpress I've ever read, so congrats, you've pushed the interest of checking out other songs people've written. =)
You really should try to record this into a file so people can hear it. =/ I really am interested in hearing how the tuning, rhythm and beat goes. ^^