for Icarus1/18/2006 c1 
5BOOMandImInControl
That was really good! I like it how it is like asking someone to not let you fall, and then you fall into them. It was really good.
Oh and thank you for the review, if you have any ideas as to how I can improve that last line of the second verse please do tell me. I have got some bad reviews on my other stories and considering taking them down, but if you have a suggestion as to how to improve them, I will listen because you have a university level in english or something, but no really, just tell me.
5BOOMandImInControlThat was really good! I like it how it is like asking someone to not let you fall, and then you fall into them. It was really good.
Oh and thank you for the review, if you have any ideas as to how I can improve that last line of the second verse please do tell me. I have got some bad reviews on my other stories and considering taking them down, but if you have a suggestion as to how to improve them, I will listen because you have a university level in english or something, but no really, just tell me.