for Remember1/1/2007 c1 
52darkmiko
good job. it has a nice flow to it. I especially like the "Remember that time When we raced and I won You wouldn’t admit that you lost Now race issues aren’t about who’s the fast one" i don't know why but it really hits me. you did an excellent job, keep it up
52darkmikogood job. it has a nice flow to it. I especially like the "Remember that time When we raced and I won You wouldn’t admit that you lost Now race issues aren’t about who’s the fast one" i don't know why but it really hits me. you did an excellent job, keep it up
12/6/2005 c1 melissa
hey! this is a good poem! heehee...lovely lovely lovely. xD
hey! this is a good poem! heehee...lovely lovely lovely. xD
11/2/2005 c1 choppingchopstix
Aw!
THats a very good poem. I like it. I should print it out and decorate it. You know what? you should try submitting that in school That would be pretty cool. Well. Maybe im overreacting. Oh well. I still think its a really nice poem!
Aw!
THats a very good poem. I like it. I should print it out and decorate it. You know what? you should try submitting that in school That would be pretty cool. Well. Maybe im overreacting. Oh well. I still think its a really nice poem!
10/30/2005 c1 13Saxifrage
Beautiful poem. it's so sad...but so true. I'm sorry that you and your friend aren't that close anymore, also.
I wrote a poem about being young and growing up. It had the same basic idea, but yours sounds much much better. Maybe you'll read mine one day...
I s'pose all "grown-ups" (or people who have recognized the reality in life) wish for the innocent ignorance we felt as a child. It scares me sometimes to think of all those children who didn't ever have that though...abused and broken. but now i'm a little off topic...
well, anyways, beautifully dark poem. I love it. Keep writing!
xoxo-Saxifrage
13SaxifrageBeautiful poem. it's so sad...but so true. I'm sorry that you and your friend aren't that close anymore, also.
I wrote a poem about being young and growing up. It had the same basic idea, but yours sounds much much better. Maybe you'll read mine one day...
I s'pose all "grown-ups" (or people who have recognized the reality in life) wish for the innocent ignorance we felt as a child. It scares me sometimes to think of all those children who didn't ever have that though...abused and broken. but now i'm a little off topic...
well, anyways, beautifully dark poem. I love it. Keep writing!
xoxo-Saxifrage