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44Torey HyltonHmm...very weird but not scary. Just weird.
10/31/2005 c1 12LostwindVery good, but rather short. Check out my Halloween Story, Deep Twilight, if you wish, but your story was pretty good for the short length it was told in. Keep writing, I would like to see more.
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