for The Pitfalls and Cliffs10/31/2005 c1 hey maria
The beginning wasn't so great, but you redeemed yourself with the last lines. Love the idea of how fate is leading you and you never know what's coming - it's so true. "those memories
still prick me in the back,
and breath down my neck" is wonderful.
The beginning wasn't so great, but you redeemed yourself with the last lines. Love the idea of how fate is leading you and you never know what's coming - it's so true. "those memories
still prick me in the back,
and breath down my neck" is wonderful.
10/31/2005 c1 simpletonsgrin
Yah, that creepy feeling at the nape of your neck- hon, those aren't memories, they're dead people (sorry- I just watched sixth sense)
Anyways, this was good, but it could use a little work.
-simpleton
Yah, that creepy feeling at the nape of your neck- hon, those aren't memories, they're dead people (sorry- I just watched sixth sense)
Anyways, this was good, but it could use a little work.
-simpleton