for Avoidance12/13/2005 c1 Indigo-Andie
wow...i love the entire thing but especially the part about standing on this to get that etc...pretty damn awesome
wow...i love the entire thing but especially the part about standing on this to get that etc...pretty damn awesome
11/16/2005 c1 
72StormyWings
Amazing. Completely drew me into your shoes, showing so much emotion in this. I must say my favorite part:
"To:
“I still like you, but I don’t want a relationship.”
Seems like things have gotten better between us, true?
(Maybe for you)"
- it's perfect. ~StormyWings
72StormyWingsAmazing. Completely drew me into your shoes, showing so much emotion in this. I must say my favorite part:
"To:
“I still like you, but I don’t want a relationship.”
Seems like things have gotten better between us, true?
(Maybe for you)"
- it's perfect. ~StormyWings
11/9/2005 c1 20Lise HEARTS Alan
This poem was really good Latrice. As always, your poems are fierce and filled with passion and compassion. But always remember that you can't love, like or even lust for someone who doesn't return the same. If he's not willing, you shouldn't be either. Avoidance isn't really the answer, but I do believe in the end, you'll get what you want or what you're supposed to get.
Nice job.
20Lise HEARTS AlanThis poem was really good Latrice. As always, your poems are fierce and filled with passion and compassion. But always remember that you can't love, like or even lust for someone who doesn't return the same. If he's not willing, you shouldn't be either. Avoidance isn't really the answer, but I do believe in the end, you'll get what you want or what you're supposed to get.
Nice job.
11/1/2005 c1 33TaraC
Oh my fucking God...that was beautiful and hard as hell from the beginning to the end. I loved it, has to be the best piece you've ever written (in my opinion) I'm so in love..you kept me so damn mesmirized by every line; it was so fucking real and I felt it really applied to me..I was so surprised to see it was dedicated to me..damn, girl, how'd that come about? Thanks for the wonderful moment of reading this.
Shay
33TaraCOh my fucking God...that was beautiful and hard as hell from the beginning to the end. I loved it, has to be the best piece you've ever written (in my opinion) I'm so in love..you kept me so damn mesmirized by every line; it was so fucking real and I felt it really applied to me..I was so surprised to see it was dedicated to me..damn, girl, how'd that come about? Thanks for the wonderful moment of reading this.
Shay
11/1/2005 c1 38SassyLil'Thunderstorm
Ok I lied...omg man this is so hot...lol of course you managed to get your twisted violence in it, but hey its always necessary...you know I'd like to harm Twuo my damn self...but anyways good job, love how it flows, love the attitue...hey I just love it...
38SassyLil'ThunderstormOk I lied...omg man this is so hot...lol of course you managed to get your twisted violence in it, but hey its always necessary...you know I'd like to harm Twuo my damn self...but anyways good job, love how it flows, love the attitue...hey I just love it...