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for Insanity

1/28/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Nice poem, lots of emotion, but in the middle I found it getting a bit off topic. Also, I see you've broken your lines very small. I find that can confuse people because your thoughts are broken up. Try to make your poem flow a bit more by bringing some thoughts together on a line. Some short lines are good for emphasis and effect, but try to make the lines a bit longer. :) Other than that, I realy liked this poem.
11/1/2005 c1 5Sorehai
The poem seemed like a bit of a frenzy, which works so well with the topic of insanity. The short lines make an impaxt and I could feel an air of uneasiness around it. Simply, this was GOOD.

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