for Rainy Bliss12/7/2005 c1 
104FunkyFlower
pretty good. love the last line. great imagery and flow. brilliant!
~mez~
104FunkyFlowerpretty good. love the last line. great imagery and flow. brilliant!
~mez~
11/1/2005 c1 5Mad Asher
wow awesome haiku much better than the ones i make :)
anyway good job i liked the way it looks like a raindrop, if you look at the way the text is shaped in general. Very nice haiku, except storm shouldnt be part of the haiku?
...well dont mind me im just a critic to everyone so no one likes my comments. Whatever, great job, i liked it anyway.
5Mad Asherwow awesome haiku much better than the ones i make :)
anyway good job i liked the way it looks like a raindrop, if you look at the way the text is shaped in general. Very nice haiku, except storm shouldnt be part of the haiku?
...well dont mind me im just a critic to everyone so no one likes my comments. Whatever, great job, i liked it anyway.
11/1/2005 c1 2TheLOVE TheHATE
aww i like this hiku its simple and its beautiful, i read it slowly and carefully and it made me feel like it was raining outside.. (even though its like 80 degrees here in san diego)
2TheLOVE TheHATEaww i like this hiku its simple and its beautiful, i read it slowly and carefully and it made me feel like it was raining outside.. (even though its like 80 degrees here in san diego)