for Dont11/21/2005 c1 
45Brinneh
I really like your style. Stream of consciousness, or whatever it's called. Great job, and thanks for clarifying that other poem for me!
45BrinnehI really like your style. Stream of consciousness, or whatever it's called. Great job, and thanks for clarifying that other poem for me!
11/5/2005 c1 24Sarah-Brighteyes
Beauty is captured in some of your metaphors dear rain.
"Maybe it was all a mistake…like a word set it stone." I love this line, it confused me a moment. I wonder how word set in stone could be a mistake, but then I think of broken marriages, rings set to say how much someone loves another, and I think hm sometimes people think of it as a mistake and what not. Just my thoughts.
I know, "Star from heaven" is a bit cliche, but it still is a wonderful line and fits in your piece. Bravo to you once more Rain. You make me smile.
Good write.
24Sarah-BrighteyesBeauty is captured in some of your metaphors dear rain.
"Maybe it was all a mistake…like a word set it stone." I love this line, it confused me a moment. I wonder how word set in stone could be a mistake, but then I think of broken marriages, rings set to say how much someone loves another, and I think hm sometimes people think of it as a mistake and what not. Just my thoughts.
I know, "Star from heaven" is a bit cliche, but it still is a wonderful line and fits in your piece. Bravo to you once more Rain. You make me smile.
Good write.