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11/6/2005 c1 1Angels-chan
whoa! this looks so cool! please update soon1
11/5/2005 c1 Unnamedlol
Hope you like the name.

Anyways, I like you story so far and can't wait to see what happens to the main character next. Your writing still is great though I do think that you could have expanded and better explained things. It seems like you were rushing the story, especially towards the end.

Also, in the summary, you say that people can give you ideas for characters and other things, how so.

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