for Forgotten Pains3/10/2006 c1 
78WinterDeity
aww...you have a knack for poetry, i can tell! Scars...scars are always bad. you keep with the rhyme scheme well. i'm jumping from topic to topic aren't I? Um...keep up the good work! *tilts head to one side* hm...i guess i can just say I loved it! ~making people everywhere feel sane, Winter~
78WinterDeityaww...you have a knack for poetry, i can tell! Scars...scars are always bad. you keep with the rhyme scheme well. i'm jumping from topic to topic aren't I? Um...keep up the good work! *tilts head to one side* hm...i guess i can just say I loved it! ~making people everywhere feel sane, Winter~
2/6/2006 c1 natasha
Again- wow! This one was- I don't know...I don't wanna say better than the first...it has different feelings that it conveys. It was great...really loved it. I actually got a little teary!
Again- wow! This one was- I don't know...I don't wanna say better than the first...it has different feelings that it conveys. It was great...really loved it. I actually got a little teary!
12/9/2005 c1 104FunkyFlower
cool ending. love the rhyming as always. ur flow is perfect and the wordings fantastic! another great poem,
~mez~
104FunkyFlowercool ending. love the rhyming as always. ur flow is perfect and the wordings fantastic! another great poem,
~mez~
11/28/2005 c1 40LoveAlways05
I'm glad you posted this poem cause it was really really good! the flow of it was awsome!
40LoveAlways05I'm glad you posted this poem cause it was really really good! the flow of it was awsome!
11/7/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
You do know that you are a very talented poet? I love the play of emotions in this, and the ending which was really good. You have a real flair for poetry. Really excellent.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxYou do know that you are a very talented poet? I love the play of emotions in this, and the ending which was really good. You have a real flair for poetry. Really excellent.
~~Trinity
11/3/2005 c1 boundtobreak
WOW, this was excellent Hayley.I loved the rhyming it all flowed very well.Keep up the good work and KW.
WOW, this was excellent Hayley.I loved the rhyming it all flowed very well.Keep up the good work and KW.
11/2/2005 c1 silentscreamer07
wow...this was amazing. Not only did you chose awesome wordings, but there's def. alot of feeling behind it. And i think that helps it have more meaning. I know how it feels to post a more personal poem, that you dont really wanna post, yet, you do. Ive posted some like that. Ne ways. I loved this, and i hope everything is okay. *smiles* *kw* I really like everything you've written so far! Hope to see ya soon! i havent in weeks! ~George
wow...this was amazing. Not only did you chose awesome wordings, but there's def. alot of feeling behind it. And i think that helps it have more meaning. I know how it feels to post a more personal poem, that you dont really wanna post, yet, you do. Ive posted some like that. Ne ways. I loved this, and i hope everything is okay. *smiles* *kw* I really like everything you've written so far! Hope to see ya soon! i havent in weeks! ~George
11/2/2005 c1 3Ang-Dev
*sighs*...this is just so incredibly beautifully written! i LOVE this poem and the rhyme scheme is amazing. i can only say, that this is DEFINITELY going on our favs and u better keep writing lol. great job, ~mez~
3Ang-Dev*sighs*...this is just so incredibly beautifully written! i LOVE this poem and the rhyme scheme is amazing. i can only say, that this is DEFINITELY going on our favs and u better keep writing lol. great job, ~mez~
11/1/2005 c1 3gummibared
About a girl 'who's name I won't mention', who lied to all her friends including me, and then moved away without even saying goodbye :(
3gummibaredAbout a girl 'who's name I won't mention', who lied to all her friends including me, and then moved away without even saying goodbye :(