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11/21/2005 c1 42Emmytastic gal
WOw. thats beautiful. amazing description. I loved every word. keep it up.

write on,Em
11/12/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
i love that last line.,. beautiful poem
11/4/2005 c1 16Theory Of The 4th Dimension
I appreciated how you captured the very essence of life. How it moves on to newer scenes, though sometimes not fast enough.

I can relate to the feeling of being beaten after a strenuous day, so a very good piece. I'm glad I found this one, I really needed a good read.
11/3/2005 c1 17dancingintheshadows
I have felt like this many times myself. I really like the line "And yet the night still skips to beats of bliss…" So very beautiful.

~dancingintheshadow
11/2/2005 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
hmm, I like it. I like the writing style here.
11/2/2005 c1 Ajna
I love the rhyming and the beat to this... It's so... I don't know, I can't put my thoughts into words. But great work!

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