for Portrait Of A Writer5/24/2006 c1 
136Elliptical Shapes
Your poems are always ridiculously good. Sometimes I wish I could eat your brain.
Keep writing man
Alan
136Elliptical ShapesYour poems are always ridiculously good. Sometimes I wish I could eat your brain.
Keep writing man
Alan
5/2/2006 c1 65Nemonus
Excellent. The wording moves a little from real serious to modern, but overall the rhythm is stable. I greatly like some lines that are very true; "Two eyes lost in the stars in search of wonders,/Thy longings are heavy young, ardent dreamer" "As that cursed fowl sings" (though I'm not sure what that means, I like it's the Raven) "So yet another dreamer left calling in the stillness for his Lenore" Fascinating how tradgedy makes us metabeautiful...The sixth stanza brings in some nice physical imagery. Sometimes you start rhyming and then stop, like freeform and rhyme in the same stanza, but somehow it works-"So we find that a dreamer is most beautiful when he is in pain" And so you touch on that. Smart-
65NemonusExcellent. The wording moves a little from real serious to modern, but overall the rhythm is stable. I greatly like some lines that are very true; "Two eyes lost in the stars in search of wonders,/Thy longings are heavy young, ardent dreamer" "As that cursed fowl sings" (though I'm not sure what that means, I like it's the Raven) "So yet another dreamer left calling in the stillness for his Lenore" Fascinating how tradgedy makes us metabeautiful...The sixth stanza brings in some nice physical imagery. Sometimes you start rhyming and then stop, like freeform and rhyme in the same stanza, but somehow it works-"So we find that a dreamer is most beautiful when he is in pain" And so you touch on that. Smart-
2/24/2006 c1 460Time To Change
This was a very thought-provoking poem. I found that it was beautiful and reminiscent in a tender, and at times even sorrowful way.
Well done. Very nice vocabulary and phrases used.
Keep on writing :)
ICT.
ps. Thank you for your review of my poem.
460Time To ChangeThis was a very thought-provoking poem. I found that it was beautiful and reminiscent in a tender, and at times even sorrowful way.
Well done. Very nice vocabulary and phrases used.
Keep on writing :)
ICT.
ps. Thank you for your review of my poem.
2/22/2006 c1 36Connie Eressea
This poem is beautifull, I just can't say something else. I loved it :PYou don't know how much I wish I could write like you.
Never stop dreaming and writingBye
36Connie EresseaThis poem is beautifull, I just can't say something else. I loved it :PYou don't know how much I wish I could write like you.
Never stop dreaming and writingBye
2/13/2006 c1 Needa S
The imagery is awesome. Beautiful write. Hey would you like to come join my site and share some of your work with us? I will send you an invite. Keep up the awesome work.
The imagery is awesome. Beautiful write. Hey would you like to come join my site and share some of your work with us? I will send you an invite. Keep up the awesome work.
1/28/2006 c1 6Count of Casualty
Okay, this one has to be my favorite out of the ones you've written. I absolutely adored it!
6Count of CasualtyOkay, this one has to be my favorite out of the ones you've written. I absolutely adored it!
1/18/2006 c1 79Spare Change
I love the romantic tone of this. You're really a passionate writer, aren't you? Kudos. :)
ps. AB Psychology student? Haha, ako naman BS Psychology. Ehe. Just saying, just saying. :P Keep writing, you're great man!
79Spare ChangeI love the romantic tone of this. You're really a passionate writer, aren't you? Kudos. :)
ps. AB Psychology student? Haha, ako naman BS Psychology. Ehe. Just saying, just saying. :P Keep writing, you're great man!
1/17/2006 c1 crazy dog events
Wonderful. There's something all together calming about this, which really makes no sense. Parts of this reminded me of Ferlenghetti.
-P. Love
P.S. Thank you ever so much for all your reviews.
Wonderful. There's something all together calming about this, which really makes no sense. Parts of this reminded me of Ferlenghetti.
-P. Love
P.S. Thank you ever so much for all your reviews.
12/16/2005 c1 37philod
Excellent poem! You used some great metaphors - very original. I like the last stanza especially
37philodExcellent poem! You used some great metaphors - very original. I like the last stanza especially
12/1/2005 c1 57shaddowcat
great poem, thanks for the review on mine, don't know how long ago it was but i appreciate it ^^
57shaddowcatgreat poem, thanks for the review on mine, don't know how long ago it was but i appreciate it ^^