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11/6/2005 c1 63lackluster
"your november-grey eyes stay wide as apples" struck me as an interesting line

i adore the whole last stanza. i can't say much more than that, it's a gorgeous poem.
11/5/2005 c1 32eldrin
W.o.w. Can I only say that this is brilliant? The movements and the words are lovely, and leave me speechless.
11/3/2005 c1 25v3point7
Wow. That was beautiful. I loved the way you set it up and the words you used to descibe things. Nice job =)
11/3/2005 c1 34lucretiabaine
Stylized with intrigue. Lovely work.
11/3/2005 c1 Ajna
I love the description of "November-grey eyes" and "misery-grey eyes". Beautiful.

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