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11/19/2005 c1 11Musical Tunes
I like the medaphore but the part about Stoke Skin.. i thought it might be good before the crying part because wound causes blood to fly right? ^_^ nice poem though
11/3/2005 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
I like the simplicity. This reminds me of so many of my older poems.

Keep up the great work.

Hillary
11/3/2005 c1 Ajna
I like the way the words "curve" here, much like the first line. You make the knife appear to be a real person. Great work.

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