for Colors8/4/2006 c9 
56felicia13
You know .. I feel very stupid right now. I didn't realize that there were multiple chapters .. good format, but I wasn't paying attention. At all. The summary's not so deceptive now .. ^^
Goddess, I'm really sorry. Ignore that other review, then .. grr.
Still lovely, but with more depth and *cough* color to it now. Wonderful!
all my love,felicia
56felicia13You know .. I feel very stupid right now. I didn't realize that there were multiple chapters .. good format, but I wasn't paying attention. At all. The summary's not so deceptive now .. ^^
Goddess, I'm really sorry. Ignore that other review, then .. grr.
Still lovely, but with more depth and *cough* color to it now. Wonderful!
all my love,felicia
8/4/2006 c1 felicia13
Fun little thing you have there .. although the summary is very deceptive. ^^
As for why someone calls me foreign .. I'm not even sure. I think it was just to break the monotony of school. But, the guy who does it is really weird, so .. who knows?
all my love,felicia
Fun little thing you have there .. although the summary is very deceptive. ^^
As for why someone calls me foreign .. I'm not even sure. I think it was just to break the monotony of school. But, the guy who does it is really weird, so .. who knows?
all my love,felicia
6/12/2006 c9 57empathic life
I love the personalities you gave each color. I definitely think pink and purple fit the most, but I don't particularly like green. But then again, I defend my favourite. Creative poem(s) here. I think the ending with white definitely worked. -E.L.
57empathic lifeI love the personalities you gave each color. I definitely think pink and purple fit the most, but I don't particularly like green. But then again, I defend my favourite. Creative poem(s) here. I think the ending with white definitely worked. -E.L.
4/17/2006 c9 hey maria
This one's my favorite after 'Green.' It's just a great end - so very final, especially with "that clean,/tie-straightening, end-of-the-road/silence."
This one's my favorite after 'Green.' It's just a great end - so very final, especially with "that clean,/tie-straightening, end-of-the-road/silence."
4/17/2006 c8 hey maria
"he’s like, “watch out life”"
Who thinks of orange like that? Very original, and perfectly described.
"he’s like, “watch out life”"
Who thinks of orange like that? Very original, and perfectly described.
4/17/2006 c6 hey maria
Oh, green. I love green and I love your poem about it. "he never talks to me," "still time for friends,/coworkers, yoga,/and twisting love affairs," it's perfect.
Oh, green. I love green and I love your poem about it. "he never talks to me," "still time for friends,/coworkers, yoga,/and twisting love affairs," it's perfect.
4/17/2006 c5 hey maria
I've never thought of yellow as bitter, but I suppose it's not that hard to imagine with lemons and all. Even though they're sour, not bitter...never mind.
And, of course, the follow-up line "makes up for it/with maybe too much pep" was brilliant.
I've never thought of yellow as bitter, but I suppose it's not that hard to imagine with lemons and all. Even though they're sour, not bitter...never mind.
And, of course, the follow-up line "makes up for it/with maybe too much pep" was brilliant.
4/17/2006 c2 hey maria
Wow. Interesting personality you've given to the color...I especially love the first line, 'red is adult,' because it's such a great start; it's blunt and direct. Perfect.
Wow. Interesting personality you've given to the color...I especially love the first line, 'red is adult,' because it's such a great start; it's blunt and direct. Perfect.
4/6/2006 c1 Cedric Quilfeather
Hmm . . . Interesting prologue . . . Colors as something to fear . . . *Reads on . . .*
Hmm . . . Interesting prologue . . . Colors as something to fear . . . *Reads on . . .*
11/24/2005 c2 UJWF0WFW0FWE0WEF0
I can't believe you explicated my poem. I would do the same for you except I dislike doing that. I did a 2+ page explication for Maya Angelou's Still I Rise(or maybe it was Alone) and I so found it boring. So I'll just ssay thank you for the review and say that I like your poem very much. And as for your review: don't think so much. The entire meaning of the poem(or what I remember of it) is some random person walking into church and this random person just happens to be a close-minded beep so when they think of God and other's beliefs concerning him/her/it they Classify: real/fake/pagan/whatever. Which is a bad thing because only the Gods should judge(classify). You got this right though: "it could mean something that you're refering to, just stolen from a point in time..." And tree Gods? Like I had a story idea for that...Anyway, thx again for the review(you did say to email a comment on your comment) but I prefer reviews because...just because. Byes.
I can't believe you explicated my poem. I would do the same for you except I dislike doing that. I did a 2+ page explication for Maya Angelou's Still I Rise(or maybe it was Alone) and I so found it boring. So I'll just ssay thank you for the review and say that I like your poem very much. And as for your review: don't think so much. The entire meaning of the poem(or what I remember of it) is some random person walking into church and this random person just happens to be a close-minded beep so when they think of God and other's beliefs concerning him/her/it they Classify: real/fake/pagan/whatever. Which is a bad thing because only the Gods should judge(classify). You got this right though: "it could mean something that you're refering to, just stolen from a point in time..." And tree Gods? Like I had a story idea for that...Anyway, thx again for the review(you did say to email a comment on your comment) but I prefer reviews because...just because. Byes.
11/23/2005 c9 5se7en days
i don't know, just brill. you made every color easy to imagine, great pesonification. i'm actually jealous of pink though i hate that color
5se7en daysi don't know, just brill. you made every color easy to imagine, great pesonification. i'm actually jealous of pink though i hate that color