for Colors11/5/2005 c9 
14kit feral
I love.Love.LOVE the ending. Like times infinity plus forever. And the lines "or the kind from the hospital that tell you your mother just died(even though you’ve known 48 hours)" are really interesting. I love the title, too. Great work- these were totally awesome. Just so brilliant! Never stop writing. ^.^
14kit feralI love.Love.LOVE the ending. Like times infinity plus forever. And the lines "or the kind from the hospital that tell you your mother just died(even though you’ve known 48 hours)" are really interesting. I love the title, too. Great work- these were totally awesome. Just so brilliant! Never stop writing. ^.^
11/5/2005 c8 kit feral
Oh, I like it. The lines "Like a warning in the night, baby, he’s like, “watch out life”. Few can keep up" are awesome. Orange sounds sexy, lol! Great work.
Oh, I like it. The lines "Like a warning in the night, baby, he’s like, “watch out life”. Few can keep up" are awesome. Orange sounds sexy, lol! Great work.
11/5/2005 c7 kit feral
"maybe I’m jealous, but I think it’s paradoxical." I love that. And I like "I know, like Red, she’ll do what must be done, but then she’ll make a game of it, and slip out of trouble-" a lot, too. I love the way you personify these! It's wickedly creative. Great, great work.
"maybe I’m jealous, but I think it’s paradoxical." I love that. And I like "I know, like Red, she’ll do what must be done, but then she’ll make a game of it, and slip out of trouble-" a lot, too. I love the way you personify these! It's wickedly creative. Great, great work.
11/5/2005 c6 kit feral
Haha, this one amused me. I love the "friends, coworkers- I just noticed that has cow in it, lol, cow orkers, lol, ANYWAY, I get distracted easily- yoga and twisting love affairs" part. Excellent.
Haha, this one amused me. I love the "friends, coworkers- I just noticed that has cow in it, lol, cow orkers, lol, ANYWAY, I get distracted easily- yoga and twisting love affairs" part. Excellent.
11/5/2005 c5 kit feral
Oh, I like it a lot. "All her faded cousins send too many wistful letters for her to forget" is great. And I love "She’d do best to play with her inner child, and stop worrying, but I don’t think she well." (Though, I think you mean will.) Great work, I really like it. :D
Oh, I like it a lot. "All her faded cousins send too many wistful letters for her to forget" is great. And I love "She’d do best to play with her inner child, and stop worrying, but I don’t think she well." (Though, I think you mean will.) Great work, I really like it. :D
11/5/2005 c4 kit feral
PURPLE! Yay, my favorite. ^.^ I love this, I always thought of purple as mysterious, too. I love the line "and she has not traveled seas to explain it to you." Wonderful.
PURPLE! Yay, my favorite. ^.^ I love this, I always thought of purple as mysterious, too. I love the line "and she has not traveled seas to explain it to you." Wonderful.
11/5/2005 c3 kit feral
Blue! Yay, I like this. I like the lines "for whom there is only praise (he would not understand otherwise)" a lot. Great work. ^.^
Blue! Yay, I like this. I like the lines "for whom there is only praise (he would not understand otherwise)" a lot. Great work. ^.^