
11/5/2005 c2
14kit feral
"Red is adult; she understands responsibility" "Red knows life is short; she’s sharp." I like those. I always thought of red as a guy, though... interesting. :P Anyway, I like it a lot.

"Red is adult; she understands responsibility" "Red knows life is short; she’s sharp." I like those. I always thought of red as a guy, though... interesting. :P Anyway, I like it a lot.
11/5/2005 c1 kit feral
This is a fantastically creative idea and I love this one. The lines "The rainbow waits for no man, woman, butterfly" are awesome. Great work!
This is a fantastically creative idea and I love this one. The lines "The rainbow waits for no man, woman, butterfly" are awesome. Great work!
11/5/2005 c1
17sunday night sky
this is lovely (i think the summary lets it down tbh) - it really makes me think. nice work :)

this is lovely (i think the summary lets it down tbh) - it really makes me think. nice work :)