for decomposition11/22/2005 c1 addie pray
The voice in this is just that perfect bitter, powerful, bullshit, hypocrisy and a bag of chips that makes you glued to every line.
The voice in this is just that perfect bitter, powerful, bullshit, hypocrisy and a bag of chips that makes you glued to every line.
11/21/2005 c1 
64not sure yet
ten years of swing sets, really liked that, it took me awhile to absorb a lot of this and im not entirely sure i did a lot of, there's a lot going on here and the poem seems to spirally keeping me reading even though i didnt quite get what i had just read before it, pulling me on, a muchly cool effect actually, another excellent poem here, lovely job
64not sure yetten years of swing sets, really liked that, it took me awhile to absorb a lot of this and im not entirely sure i did a lot of, there's a lot going on here and the poem seems to spirally keeping me reading even though i didnt quite get what i had just read before it, pulling me on, a muchly cool effect actually, another excellent poem here, lovely job
11/15/2005 c1 59HellHeartedlyBent
follow the leader – he is melancholy,he is the deadliest of winding roadsand you are a sailing ship on oceans blacksplintered vessel with a misty-eyed first mate,but it’s too late to cry over a spilt milky way
wonderful. i really loved the whole thing. you have an amazing talent for imagery and rythm, everything goes by chaotic and sporadic. i love it.
59HellHeartedlyBentfollow the leader – he is melancholy,he is the deadliest of winding roadsand you are a sailing ship on oceans blacksplintered vessel with a misty-eyed first mate,but it’s too late to cry over a spilt milky way
wonderful. i really loved the whole thing. you have an amazing talent for imagery and rythm, everything goes by chaotic and sporadic. i love it.