for When Love Leaves12/4/2005 c1 
34Smoky Bear
there's so much serentiy in this poem, which is a complete juxtapostition of content which shows strength of soul, especially at times like that. even through the confused and bitter lines in the poem i get a sense of peace...
it's very prose-like, but remains poetic throughout, another nice piece!
hey i didn't say thank you in my review of "An Ode to Mary Magdalene's Alabastron" it's not that i'm ungrateful, just got interrupted in writing it, sorry. and thank you - and for the one the spot one as well. made my day. twice.
34Smoky Bearthere's so much serentiy in this poem, which is a complete juxtapostition of content which shows strength of soul, especially at times like that. even through the confused and bitter lines in the poem i get a sense of peace...
it's very prose-like, but remains poetic throughout, another nice piece!
hey i didn't say thank you in my review of "An Ode to Mary Magdalene's Alabastron" it's not that i'm ungrateful, just got interrupted in writing it, sorry. and thank you - and for the one the spot one as well. made my day. twice.
11/30/2005 c1 3aprofa2003
I relate so well this poem. Your writing is AMAZING! Hope to be able to put my feelings into words like you do someday.
3aprofa2003I relate so well this poem. Your writing is AMAZING! Hope to be able to put my feelings into words like you do someday.
11/6/2005 c1 loyanofviolence
Liked the way you wrote this. Nice length too. Keep it up!
♥Staring at the Infamous♥
Liked the way you wrote this. Nice length too. Keep it up!
♥Staring at the Infamous♥