for Recycled Words6/21/2008 c1 
25destinee's notebook
The idea of words being recycled is true indeed. And the last three lines are quite insightful.
Thank you for stating said insight. :]
- Des
25destinee's notebookThe idea of words being recycled is true indeed. And the last three lines are quite insightful.
Thank you for stating said insight. :]
- Des
7/18/2006 c1 80magnusthewolf
this is deep and emotional and indeed interesting. very nice job. :) why not center the title?
80magnusthewolfthis is deep and emotional and indeed interesting. very nice job. :) why not center the title?
1/1/2006 c1 33forsakensmile
Thanks so much for reviewing my stuff.
I love this poem. It conveys love just the way I like it.
"It's true/ That I don't love you/ The way you want me to."Just beautiful.
33forsakensmileThanks so much for reviewing my stuff.
I love this poem. It conveys love just the way I like it.
"It's true/ That I don't love you/ The way you want me to."Just beautiful.
11/22/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
man, I feel stupid. I like drop dead when I read your review because you are like, you know, famous on FP.
anyway. me like the poem. no 'like' is an understatement, I'd say "LOVED it" but I am trying to broaden my vocabulary. I adored this with blinding passion. "I’m feeding you recycled words, tailoring them to your tastes" I'd copy and paste every line but I loved that in particular. everything in this is like a really GOOD song. lovely, lovely writing.
~* noelle
90poetic abortionman, I feel stupid. I like drop dead when I read your review because you are like, you know, famous on FP.
anyway. me like the poem. no 'like' is an understatement, I'd say "LOVED it" but I am trying to broaden my vocabulary. I adored this with blinding passion. "I’m feeding you recycled words, tailoring them to your tastes" I'd copy and paste every line but I loved that in particular. everything in this is like a really GOOD song. lovely, lovely writing.
~* noelle
11/8/2005 c1 arcane devices
Possibly one of the best extended metaphor poems I've read in a while... Major props, Cindy Moon. - ADD-san
Possibly one of the best extended metaphor poems I've read in a while... Major props, Cindy Moon. - ADD-san
11/6/2005 c1 42Green Yoshi
what is love but words fed to fools...
I've been waiting for new works, I'm so happy to see you alive again. Well, ok, I've seen you alive recently, but I'm glad that your works are back. Though, these new works are, um, anything happen recently?
42Green Yoshiwhat is love but words fed to fools...
I've been waiting for new works, I'm so happy to see you alive again. Well, ok, I've seen you alive recently, but I'm glad that your works are back. Though, these new works are, um, anything happen recently?