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8/20/2014 c3 levi97100
good but rushed
1/1/2006 c3 7Alareic
It's has been a while.

I loved the story. And I think I'm back to writing on Fictionpress once again.

Check my profile for a new story soon.

:D

-Alareic-
12/25/2005 c1 13Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu
Hi there! Thanks very much for your review. It makes my day! ^^ Anyway, on with the review. Well, I did like the way you do the story. It's very intriguing and I would want to know what's gonna happen next. Lila seems to be an interesting character and I'll like to know what will turn out for her. Anyway, hope to review again! ^^
12/2/2005 c2 2Casey Drake
oo... sweet. and the rubber chicken episode was a nice little comic relief.

:) CD
11/19/2005 c2 3blankee
It might not be though but it's stunning! Absolutely!
11/18/2005 c2 Eloquently
Oh...Mr. Yutzy's science class. You know something, I'm not even going to go there hahaha!

Great plot/ideas. I'm not one for the gang stuff, but this isn't bad. I like it!

-Bria
11/10/2005 c1 1Clodhopper
This was very interesting, I liked it a lot. Curious little tale you've given us here to think about. I'd be careful at the start things felt a bit choppy on descriptions, though the dialogue was great. Comma and punct errors were your biggest problems, like when commas go where in dialogue and that kind of thing.

Mack

PS sorry it took me so long to get over here and review you!

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