11/8/2007 c1 lymli
oh my, I like that, the imagery is nice and the writing style is interesting, I guess.
oh my, I like that, the imagery is nice and the writing style is interesting, I guess.
8/23/2006 c1 1jive maxwell
:O God ending! I was wondering where it was all going, but you tied it up nicely.
:O God ending! I was wondering where it was all going, but you tied it up nicely.
4/7/2006 c1 Sakura Reyna
I see East Asian, Western, and many other worldly views on simple things like colors, and yet I see the different things mean the same for everyone. I enjoyed this!
I see East Asian, Western, and many other worldly views on simple things like colors, and yet I see the different things mean the same for everyone. I enjoyed this!
2/10/2006 c1 13Yza Zaz
I like the way you describe the life. This is a very interesting point of view for a poetry.
I like the way you describe the life. This is a very interesting point of view for a poetry.
1/24/2006 c1 13lipgloss-and-blacktears
I love the originality of this piece. I love how you descrive the different views of life.
I love the originality of this piece. I love how you descrive the different views of life.